Wednesday, November 30, 2011

simile poem


This is my attempt at a simile poem.
Pain is not like a most joyous, fantastic, bruise,
A bruise is not like a fun, fantabulous, cruise,
Pain is scaring like things that never go away,
Pain will scar you for life like a heart breaking,
A bruise will go away like an angry cold,
Pain is kind of like a bruise in a weird way,
They are alike because they both really hurt.

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

grandparents poem

                        Heres my attempt at a grandparents poem.
 Grandparents give us everything
Just like our dads and moms
You’ll give us some candy that rots our gums
And makes go hyper
You’ll read us poems like peter pick a pickled pepper

funny poem

heres my attempt at a funny poem
Turkey,
Screaming, gobbling
Delicious, juicy, plump
Bloody, dead
turkey

serious poem

       Heres my attempt on a thankgiving poem. 
Thank you
Thank you for the things you give,
Thank you for your forgiveness,
Thank you for letting us live this wonderful life,
Thank you for letting us have our beautiful, creative minds,
We’ll pray to you every day,
Even on this thankful day,
Thank you god for being there,
Through thick and thin,
And everywhere,
We all love you no matter what,
So thank you a lot,
And you will see the mystery of goodness of me.

Friday, November 18, 2011

death

Who’s soul I’m ready to keep,
You will fall into a deep sleep.
You will never awake again,
Your advancer in heaven will now begin.

Welcome to heaven my dear,
Look into this mirror,
And see what you have to live for,
That’s what you will become,

Go to the light,
And you will see,
You’re shining armor for you and me,
Go back to your body for we will see.

Thursday, November 17, 2011

poems

Today we began a poetry unit. I think poetry is about love and the suffering of a heart break. I personally love poetry. Sometimes I helps you out in life and maybe just for entertainment.
We read Love That Dog by Sharon Creech
Pause #1: I think anybody can write poetry. You just need to believe in your selves. Put words that rime to make a phrase and make sure it make since into what you’re writing. Put a lot of effort into it and I’m sure you will succeed.
Pause#2: you can write about any normal, daily things and write about how you feel about it. If you want to make up things that you can write about. Ex: dogs, cats, whales, and fish. Just use your imagination and you’ll go far. If you want to read some other poems and get some ideas.
Pause#3: if you have some extra time on your hands then try and write something’s of how you feel and add lots of description. If you feel weird about your writing then get someone to read it and get there opinion and don’t just do one person do 3 or 4 people and see if they like would love it to.
Pause#4: some times use sounds in your poem. Sometimes use shapes in your poems or write your poem in a shape. Ex: a dog, a tree, a heart, an oval. Don’t let other peoples opinions get you down. If you like it then you have made your self happy don’t worry about other peoples thoughts. Sometimes write poetry just to get feeling out so you won’t keep your feeling bottled up.
Pause#5: try not to use someone else’s words or just don’t copy them. Don’t make other people write your poetry for you. Try and write to your inspirer and send them your story and maybe get some more ideas from them if they read your poem.
Pause#6: when things pop into your head try to write the ideas down. After you are done writing the poem check your words to make sure that they are spelt write even when you’re typing. Add some sadness to the poem if you want to and show your poem to the world or a small portion of it.
End: make sure to use a good ending don’t just cut off at the end. If you have sad poem try and make sure to make it happy then. Add details and rhyming words. If you’re lucky maybe your inspirer will pay you a visit. Try and put your inspirers name on the cover of you story.

Jack got his inspiration from Walter d. Meyers. He was an author in the story and he used every day things in a normal day life.
Here is my attempt on this story.
Alice
Adorable, fat
Cute, cuddly, playful
Lazy, pudgy, loud, strong
Loveable, messy
Alice

Friday, November 11, 2011

the crush

                           Readers beware your in for a scare..................................
One stormy night the Henderson’s fell asleep watching the fox 4 news. Then a stalker appeared at the window. Bam! The thunder went. Then the stalker was closer to the door. Bam! The thunder went again. Then he was inside the house staring at Nicole and Jake for 4 hours.
            He knocked them out when he saw Nicole’s eyes flutter. He drug them to his run down black mini van with paint chips peeled off and bloody claw marks on the back door. While he was driving down the road he said “I can’t believe she turned me down for prom at that day I swore that I would get her big time. Today is that day!” When Nicole woke up she was tied to a slimy, moldy pole. When Jake woke up he was tied to the ceiling with chains and he had hooks in his body the more he screamed the more to hooks went into his skin.
When Nicole finally noticed that she put a pocket knife in her pocket she got it out and cut the ropes around her hands and feet. When she got the ropes off she dropped the knife and ran down the dark hallway with very few swinging twitching lights. “Help!” screamed Jake. Nicole ran to find him. She found him in a room tied up. With diffucultys she got two of six hooks out of his body. “Thump, thump, thump, thump!” Nicole heard the foot steps so she hid behind a wall. The stalker talked to Jake for a while. When Nicole sneezed, she sneezed really loud. So loud that the stalker heard her. He ran outside of the room and ran in the wrong direction. Nicole ran to Jake and got the rest of the hooks out of his body. She unties the chains off of his hands and he fell to the ground.
                        They started to run they ran so far that they ran into the stalker with a pipe she hit him in the back and Jake punched him in the face. Then they found an out. When they got out they used there cell phones and called the police. When the police arrived they also brought along the ambulance. They found the stalker and brought him to the hospital.
            The next morning the nurse went to check up on him and he wasn’t there. She got the security and they checked the room. There was nothing. They found they the iv on the floor and the window was open.
       

Thursday, November 10, 2011

pugadors

We wrote an exposititory writings in class. Please enjoy.
WOW, I bet you don’t know anything on pugadors. They are a pug and lab mix and Ill tell you about there physical features, of what makes them a mammal, and other facts. Pugadors are amazingly cute. They are originally from china also.
Pugadors are amazingly cute. They have a tannish tint to there fur and some have a black muzzle with two black ears and a curly tail. According to Breeders.com it says that pugadors can get up to 2-3 ft tall and17-24lbs. The physical features of a pugador can make it more adorable and to figure out what types of combined dogs in it.           
By making a pugador a mammal one thing is that they breathe through their lungs and that instead of being born from an egg they are born alive. Instead of have colts or cubs they have puppies. Pugadors can have up to 1-3 pups at a time. Pugadors move around or travel by their paws or in purses. Most pugadors live in common households. Some animals have cold blood in them but these dogs have warm blood. If you want to find out more please read on.
Pugadors protect themselves by growling, snapping, and clawing at there predator. I don’t think that most pugadors are endangered. The internet knows that there not the most popular dogs in the world but there not endangered. Pugadors will eat mostly anything that you give them. They eat meat such as pork, beef, deer, and jerky. Pugadors also eat dog food, grass, sticks to keep there teeth sharp, and cat food. The mammals are really, really hyper and love to play and bite with there sharp and kind of dull baby teeth.   
            So now you know most stuff about my topic, the pugador. I hope you learned a lot about this mammal. Maybe you already knew some stuff on this dog and maybe you didn’t but, im glad that ive tried to teach you something. Adios, my friends.